Your website has good design, decent traffic, and zero conversions. The problem is the words.
Design gets attention. Copy gets action. You can have the most beautiful website in the world — but if the text says "Welcome to our company, leader in innovative solutions for over 15 years," nobody's buying. Copywriting isn't literary writing. It's sales in written form. It follows specific rules, proven formulas, and a relentless focus on one thing: what the reader gets.
Rule 1: Lead with the benefit, not the feature
Feature: "Our software has 256-bit SSL encryption." Benefit: "Your customer data is protected by bank-level security." Feature: "We offer same-day service." Benefit: "Your problem solved before dinner." The feature is what you built. The benefit is what the customer gets. Nobody buys encryption — they buy peace of mind. Write every sentence from the reader's perspective: "What's in it for me?"
Rule 2: The PAS formula (Problem → Agitation → Solution)
Problem: State the problem the reader has. "You're spending $2,000/month on ads but can't tell which ones bring customers." Agitation: Make the problem feel urgent. "Every month that goes by, you're potentially wasting half that budget — $12,000/year — on campaigns that don't work." Solution: Present your offer as the answer. "Our tracking system shows you exactly which campaign generated each customer — so you can cut the waste and double down on what works." PAS works for homepage headlines, email subjects, social posts, and ads.
Rule 3: Specificity beats generality
"We help businesses grow" = says nothing. "We helped 47 local businesses increase their leads by an average of 34% in 90 days" = says everything. Specific numbers, specific timeframes, specific outcomes. When you can't be specific about results, be specific about the process: "A 45-minute strategy session where we analyze your top 3 competitors and identify 5 quick wins."
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